Some real feedback.

Ashnan. Thank you. As to the "reminded," you are right. It was the wrong word. I meant to use remindin'. Accents are tricky to write, but remindin' definitely fits better.

The second post I made here does not immediately follow the bio post in the story of Caer the Navigator. It was an arbitrary example of my third person writing. I actually did a sequence of posts about this persona at The Pirates Guild. I could repost her story here if people are really interested. I really do like the feedback.